Thursday, 14 January 2010
25 Word Pitch Feedback
When we presented our ideas to the class we gained some valuable ideas about our Magazine. The fist important piece of information we got was that the majority of the class liked the idea of having an element of cartoon in the magazine and we were encouraged by this, and have decided to add some more cartoony details onto the magazine. However we also realised that we need to think about what's going on the contents page and other details like this. With that in mind we decided to have it on a new single being released by the person on the front cover.
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ReplyDeleteAdam/Josh
ReplyDeleteyou need to make sure you use any advice or help/ feedback you get in the right way. Class feedback from the pitches should have been included under the appropriate headings.
why the 15 word pitch? 25 was the brief so you have wasted an opportunity to present your work in a coherent fashion.
label all posts and add a label list.
add a link list for any websites you refer to in your research.
use more images. Make sure we can see where you get your inspiration from. what are your points of reference for your work. why have you chosen them etc?
You have a lot of work to do. Look at Ricken's blog for ideas.