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When we presented our ideas to the class we gained some valuable ideas about our Magazine. The fist important piece of information we got was that the majority of the class liked the idea of having an element of cartoon in the magazine and we were encouraged by this, and have decided to add some more cartoony details onto the magazine. However we also realised that we need to think about what's going on the contents page and other details like this. With that in mind we decided to have it on a new single being released by the person on the front cover.